feedback

My group is unfortunately not the best one and they just didn't get the task and didn't want to do anything, so basically I don't have any feedback from them, I don't really understand what is written on my sheet and it's not even completed fully. I tried to ask them what they thought, but it was so hard just to make them talk. Jonathan noticed that and said he was sorry I have this group and that he can give me some feedback later. When I came back I tried to fill at least others' sheets so at least someone has feedback, but they weren't just listening to me doing their own stuff. It was supeeer hard to do anything with them so Jonathan tried to help me and at some point, even one of them started talking but it quickly stopped as soon as Jonathan left. That day was a complete disaster. Although, I think I did quite a good job and I like my project. Jonathan did give me feedback later it was straightforward and a bit harsh, but I didn't expect anything else from him and I actually glad he is like that. If you want to have real and honest feedback you should definitely go talk to him.

From Jonathan's feedback, I understood that in the end, my project is not so unified. And that's actually very true since the whole project was so long by the end I just had a series of photos with different ideas and not all of them worked together. And that's very important so in the next project, I want to make my idea well thought out, united and logical. He finally made me realise why the photo with berries doesn't fit - because it's the only photo with a completely flat background! Honestly, I should've used the idea of pinning berries to the wall but I did the easier option instead(

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